I don’t know the genres of music
But I hear the untouched dew drops fall
Maybe I even hear your fate giving a distant call
If you can’t desert a reference
Call it a love harsher than indifference
If all you remember is pain
Then you were destined to part
But if the rippling rain on the lake makes you insane
Then you gave the hibiscus by the stream your heart
Don’t give me letters with words that prove your skill
Those composed in the moments of purpose driven will
Give me the letters that were written at dusk
Letters of resentment in the moments of lusk
This instant is like a trampled petal
Rising and fluttering again
Leaving a faint fragnance
Of freshness mingled with decay
In a dense wind that floats without going astray

This really resonated beautifully 💖
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Thanks Hannah!💜
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The last stanza has some beautiful imagery! Touching 😊
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Thank you! 💜
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Wow, is all I can manage.
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Haha that’s more than enough, thank you so much!
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🙂
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Wow! Written from the heartâ¦
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Thanks Paula for always being so supportive, I’m glad you liked it.
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What an amazing poem. Fresh and light as a dew drop. The rippling rain on the lake, moments of purpose driven will…wow…it was full of pearls…well done…👏👏🤜🤛🌸🌸
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Thank you for reading I’m glad you liked it!
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You’re welcome…
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Hello Kanjika… I ain’t just praising you.. but i wanted to let you know how beautiful your poems are.. scratch that… they aren’t just poems..
this is the first time i am visiting your blog.. but this is certainly not the last!
beautiful and an elegant blog!
keep writing!!
regards
Aathmana
Read.Love.Live.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and compliments. I hope I can write well enough to be worthy worthy of your praise. Thank you for reading and being so supportive. This made my day!
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😀😃You are a lovely person! All the very best for the journey ahead!😊🤗
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Love this poem💙. You’ve nicely written it.
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Thank you Olivia!
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Very well written!
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the last stanza is F I R E !!!!!
🔥🔥🔥
love always,
[gotw}
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Thank you for checking out my blog recently!
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The pleasure’s mine!
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Lovelyyy🥰🥰💖
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Absolutely lovely.
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